Freewrite "stop"

My ears are ringing and all i see is smoke. I'm face down on the floor along with all the others. I try to get up but I get pushed back down to the floor. Now my hands are tied up. My hearing is returning and the only sound coming through is a man, ordering around everyone in the building. I see two other people, accomplices of the man yelling; they were wearing dark sunglasses, bandannas that took up their lower faces, and tailored suits. They all looked alike. Now I hear sirens in the distance, but why? I can't remember where I was or what happened, just waking up to this mess. The people around me are terrified, but I'm still oblivious to what's truly going on. I attempt to get up again and I succeed! I see the nearest exit and run towards it as fast as I can. [-Jump-Crash-] I went through the glass door and yell for someone to help us, but no one answered, no one came. I turned around to see the barrel of a shotgun. Now I remember, I was in the bank cashing my paycheck when these three men came in [-BANG!-] I'm on the ground again, but this time I'm not getting back up...
"STOP!, CUT!, that's a wrap people, good job on the first scene, keep it up."

Blogging???

Well I am going to write about the band I'm in because I have just returned from our practice for this party we're playing at this Friday and it's fresh in my mind. We have our 5 completed songs dialed down so today we were trying out four different ones; one Mike(singer) wrote, one Cody(guitar) wrote, one I wrote and of course Akon's Dangerous! It was probably the most productive practice we have ever had... I think. Oh, to give some background information, we are basically writing and practicing so much new material because Miles G. told us that we have a show in a little less than like 4 weeks in Easton(Coffee East or what ever it is now) that he penciled in for us and we need 60 minutes of songs and well... that's generally a lot so we've been hard at work. And definitely check us out on our myspace page www.myspace.com/perfectingkate
And I believe we are playing at Alex's Skate vid's premier so check both out!